My attempt at writing in German
Correction ( courtesy of Hellotalk friends )
Once upon a time
with the outside world
refused to acknowledge
A week later
about a month
desperate to figure out
pulls out a paper
Yall I am also learning, so bear with me regarding the translations. I am translating as I understand and not literally.
Also, I do not always receive corrections to my HelloTalk posts, this means that you may find errors in the stories.
Therefore please do not hesitate to comment below, where the mistakes are and how I could improve on them. Thanks in advance.
Da dies mein erster Versuch ist, auf Deutsch zu schreiben, zögern Sie bitte nicht, wenn Sie irgendwelche Fehler finden, diese unten zu kommentieren.
HelloTalk ( for corrections)
* Not 100% sure of this sentence’s translation.